(Braided Writing: take at least three different narratives, each of whom has his or her own story, and then interweave and converge at or near the climax of the book.)
Giovanna leaps off the connected tubes helping her older cousin to her feet before she turns around to grab the empty tube, that’s when her eyes land on a very noticeable rip on her older cousins’ swimsuit right on her butt. I hear a sudden erupt of laughter behind me, shooting my cousin a puzzled look over my shoulder. I follow her gaze and to my horror see my bathing suit torn right down the middle of my butt.
Ian and Giovanna twitch in the harsh leather seats trying in vain to get comfortable, their bright red skin makes sickening sticky noises when they peel their legs up to let some air in under their legs. I squirm in the front seat the California sun beats against my legs irritating the itchy sunburn. Leaning forward I turn the AC on full blast as my mother chastises us for the hundredth time that we should have worn sunblock.
Pam works her fingers massaging the olive oil deep into her granddaughter’s sunburnt shoulder blades, sighing deeply as she lets the last drop slip over her oily hands saying under her breath, “Now I’m craving a salad.” I let the olive oil glide all over my shoulder blades, the cooling relief brings forth a fresh breeze of comfort. My grandmother leans back and walks towards the small fan in the corner pointing it towards my naked oily body.
Erwin carried the heavy yellow board up the wooden steps, at last at the 4th landing he peers behind his shoulder at his two-beat red children slowly climbing up behind him, chuckling while his wife took pictures of them. I step forward on shaky legs, holding my breath letting the water splash down, I hear my father yell out, “it’s not that bad it just looks like a death drop but it will be fun!” Gripping onto the handles I send the lifeguard a shaky head nod, the plunge erupts a Hollywood scream from my vocal cords causing the whole water park to freeze and stare at my dropping body skip atop the water’s surface.
Sean’s stomach climbs up his throat as he gains speed down the rickety blue water slide the tarp under him shoots off underneath his weight just as he rounds a harsh corner. I grip my fingers tighter against the slide’s walls, the water rushes against my thighs wanting to push me down the slide into the pool, my smile grows across my face when a deserted tarp speeds towards me, I roll my eyes as Sean comes grinning around the corner crashing into me. We share a mischievous look before we hear the piercing whistle sounds echoing around us, giggling like children we continue our childhood antics.